Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Ecosystem poem


Ecosystem


an old man
shaking
brittle boned
long pole extending
from leathered hands
cracked
a flame at the end quaking
lights the candles
lining the entire
church
on the outskirts of town
starting in darkness
this domed cylindrical spire
of crazed mud and thatch
inside awaken
wick by wick
to melt and pool
at the virgins feet

the pole extends
all the way up
to the high domed ceiling
the spark catching

in succession
from the ground
up

his pole traveled up 
glow by glow
smooth
all white wax
pooling slowly
into lilies 
and mushrooms

the shadows scrambled away further and further
 upward
    until

roots
from the top
hang down in strands
from a cracked mural
of wet shadows
dripping
painted
green

down
flashes
and seeds
scattered
golden

people laid bails of grain 
and chicken heads
at the feet of the virgin 
the wood she was carved out of
tinder
given to
burn
if not for
the moss
that grows
from above

6 comments:

  1. guess even a church can have an ecosystem that keeps everything in balance
    interesting reaction

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  2. This is a very interesting response to the prompt.....unexpected, and cool. I like the imagery.

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  3. Laura,

    Great imagery with your words. I could almost smell and see the wax dropping into artistic forms as each was lit....I liked the presence in that environment...

    Eileen

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  4. Wonderful images outlining a culture of faith and belief...bkm

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  5. ...i like your keen & sensitive observations in this... great job.. smiles...

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