Ecosystem
an old man
shaking
brittle boned
long pole extending
from leathered hands
cracked
a flame at the end quaking
lights the candles
lining the entire
church
on the outskirts of town
starting in darkness
this domed cylindrical spire
of crazed mud and thatch
inside awaken
wick by wick
to melt and pool
at the virgins feet
the pole extends
all the way up
to the high domed ceiling
the spark catching
in succession
from the ground
up
his pole traveled up
glow by glow
smooth
all white wax
pooling slowly
into lilies
and mushrooms
the shadows scrambled away further and further
upward
until
roots
from the top
hang down in strands
from a cracked mural
of wet shadows
dripping
painted
green
down
flashes
and seeds
scattered
golden
people laid bails of grain
and chicken heads
at the feet of the virgin
the wood she was carved out of
tinder
given to
burn
if not for
the moss
that grows
from above
guess even a church can have an ecosystem that keeps everything in balance
ReplyDeleteinteresting reaction
This is a very interesting response to the prompt.....unexpected, and cool. I like the imagery.
ReplyDeleteLaura,
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery with your words. I could almost smell and see the wax dropping into artistic forms as each was lit....I liked the presence in that environment...
Eileen
Wonderful images outlining a culture of faith and belief...bkm
ReplyDeleteGorgeous imagery!
ReplyDelete...i like your keen & sensitive observations in this... great job.. smiles...
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